Tuesday, April 29, 2014

"Haven't seen you for a while"... um...

By now, if you're like me, you've all run into a high school classmate or two that you haven't seen for almost ten years (maybe more if you aren't me) and you had the opportunity to play that awkward "How have you been?" conversation game. You know the one: he or she will tell you at least one interesting thing they've been up to since graduation (at least you hope its interesting), you tell him or her something you hope sounds just as interesting (though it never sounds as interesting as you hope), neither of you really care but ask at least one follow-up question to pretend you do, and then you're both on your separate ways. Not so painful when you're in a place like the supermarket or that adult video store you frequent (though honestly, who goes out to browse for porn these days, stop it!), but what if you're someplace you can't escape so quickly from? A couple weeks ago, I was on the bus and there's really no where to run to when you're on the bus unless you're willing to get off and wait for the next bus but then the next one isn't coming for another half hour, you hope since with this traffic it could be an hour and you don't want to be standing in the sun for that long and you can't sit in the shade because that's where the homeless guy stores all his stuff. Trust me, I thought it through.
     "But why would you even need to think of an escape plan?" you may naively ask. Surely, almost ten years would give the two of you plenty to talk awkwardly about for an hour? And you would be wrong. First of all, we were both pretty antisocial kids back in the day and honestly that hasn't changed much. Second, I hate talking on the bus, especially when I'm standing and trying to constantly adjust my voice to be heard over the sound of the bus but not enough to bother anyone else. Mostly, though, it's what I think is called the Conversation Paradox: The longer you haven't seen someone, the less you actually have to talk about. *I have no idea if this is actually a real thing, and, if not, you can stop reading before you get to me bullshitting something that clearly isn't real. (side note: when did "bullshitting" become a word? Spell-check doesn't seem to see anything wrong with using it as a word, i.e. no red, squiggly error line is popping up)
      To be fair, we did make it a good fifteen minutes of talking. Work ended up as the first topic as were both on the bus going home from our respective jobs. Sadly, I think the second was what we've heard was going on with some of our other classmates, which we didn't really know too much about. Then the awkward silence started to set in. And luckily by then, a couple seats opened up and I was immediately asleep. I felt kind of bad about that and probably should have made more of an attempt at keeping the conversation going but we both just got off work... and ... sleep.
     Besides, TEN YEARS! Okay, almost ten years but let's round up to make this a little easier. I can barely remember what kind of person I was ten years ago. That's a lie, but honestly, I can barely remember what kind of person my other classmates were back in the day. And that's probably why these conversations go south so quickly, because we haven't kept in touch and I don't remember too much about the past. Or it could be that I'm still trying to base these conversations in the past instead of trying to update them to the present... you know, like you're supposed to be doing in these "How have you been?" conversations you find so awkward. Ahh, okay, I'm starting to see what I've been doing wrong.
     I guess I could've brought up recent interests to fill the time, maybe even found a common one. You know, the thing that keeps you and your friends talking for hours even though you just saw each other a week or two ago. What was I interested in a couple weeks ago? I think Bleach was starting to get good again. Probably a couple TV shows. The "Mr. Chu" music video just came out, I think. But not stories. Don't go telling people that, they don't have the time. "I pet a koala" is fine, but don't go telling them about the whole trip (though that was like 8 months ago so don't go bringing that up anyway). And no achievements like the whole "quit smoking" thing; no one likes a show-off.
     Now that I've written all this out, maybe it's just me. Maybe I'm just shitty at basic conversation etiquette and sharing. Or maybe I'm just a boring person. It's probably both. Well, that was a waste of time though if I re-read this enough maybe I'll find the lesson I think I'm supposed to learn from this whole thing. Thanks for wasting time with me, though, I guess, though maybe you just had nothing better to do. (to be fair, I did give you a chance to run)

Thursday, April 17, 2014

I won the nicest rejection letter ever

Dear Alan,

Thank you for letting us read “The Tomb of Ashcroft Manor”. After careful consideration, we’ve decided we won’t be able to use it in The First Line. 
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Fun story, Alan, and the writing was tight. We just had a lot of uncovered keys in the submissions. Try us again.


Like I said, definitely the nicest rejection letter I ever expected to get and it's probably for that reason that it took me so long to post the story (since they ask everyone to wait until the magazine is printed before using your submitted stories). If you're curious about the winners or even feel like entering yourself, check out The First Line. But, as promised, here is my rejected work and hopefully I'll get started on something else, eventually.




The Tomb of Ashcroft Manor

Carlos discovered a key under a pile of shoes in the back of his grandmother’s closet. It didn’t look impressive or special but Carlos knew it was. After all, in certain magic clans keys were just as significant as wands or pointy hats. And, he thought, if this was The Key, it may be the second most valuable item in all of Ashcroft Manor.
“Did you find anything else?” Behind him, Sarah meticulously ransacked their late grandmother’s belongings with all the grace and tact of a rampaging bull, tossing shelves and overturning dressers with simple flicks of her wand. Their grandmother managed to amass quite a collection in the nearly two centuries before she passed.
Quickly, Carlos pocketed the key. “Just another spell-cutter,” he said as he instead flashed his own enchanted knife, hoping she wouldn’t recognize it. Grandmother, or Lady Ashcroft as she was formally known to the rest of the families under the House of Ash name, was known to always carry a spell-cutter similar to the one he held. He hoped it would pass as just another trinket.
Without warning, Sarah swung her wand like a fisherman casting a line as the air between the siblings heated up. A green ball of light appeared and raced across the room toward Carlos. Reacting, he forced some of his own magic into the spell-cutter and swept it through the air. The blade collided with the green orb and, with a flash, it vanished and returned the room to its original, crisp wintery climate.
Sarah already turned her back to Carlos by the time he cut through her spell. “Add it to the collection,” she said, motioning to the bed where they put the rest of their mutually acquired magic tools, “but remember we’re here for the Grimrose.”
Instead, Carlos tucked the knife back into his belt and headed toward the rear of the closet. Ever since they were small, Sarah liked to be the one in charge even if he was the older one. He figured it was because grandmother gave her a wand and laughed at the idea of giving one to him, someone who shared their name but not their blood. She liked to say he was only an Ashcroft in name and would never be a true Ashcroft. This was probably the reason he didn’t have a problem raiding her things before the family even put her body in the ground. After all, Lady Ashcroft’s will, in just two words, specified exactly how she wanted all her magic tools divided – Finder’s Keepers.
The closet, like the house itself, was much bigger than it seemed from the outside. A simple spell made the closet the size of a small room much as it turned grandmother’s ranch-style home into a three-story mansion. Ducking behind several old dressers in the back of the dusty closet, Carlos pulled the key from his pocket. Holding it carefully in his palm, he began to channel magic into the key.
Everyone knew that Lady Ashcroft never locked her doors, claiming that anyone who broke into her house did so of their own free will and she would punish that poor soul accordingly. However, only a handful knew the truth – that she never locked her doors because she lost the key within a week of moving into Ashcroft Manor.
Carlos unleashed the energy he poured into the key, hoping it would guide him to the lock it opened. Instead, the magic rebounded from every direction and tossed him into the wall. He smiled. It rebounded from everywhere. The key literally told him that it went with every lock in the house. Carlos practically skipped out of the closet as an elated voice called to him. “You’re a true Ashcroft now. You’re just like us,” it said, the voice old and familiar. But it didn’t matter to him. He now controlled Ashcroft Manor!
Sarah gave Carlos just enough time to close the closet door before she slammed him into it. With ropes of pure magic, she lifted him to his feet. Extending a hand, she said just four words. “Give me the key.”
Before he could even sneer in Sarah’s direction, the ropes shoved him into the door again. And again. And again. Magic filled the air. It was literally crackling with it as Carlos’ hair rose and tugged at their roots. It buzzed and hummed at such deafening decibels that he could barely form a thought. It burned his lungs just to breathe. It was more energy than Sarah ever released before. In his confusion, Carlos caught a glimpse of Sarah’s wand … still tucked in the belt around her waist. In her hand she held another wand. The Grimrose wand.
Eleven and seven-sixteenths inches from end to pointed tip with an ever-so-slight bend where the leather-wrapped grip finished. Thirteen thorns scattered themselves along the Grimrose, each barely visible to the naked eye yet sharp enough to poke out said eye if it ever got too close. Lady Ashcroft forced a prophet to carve the final fourteen days of humanity into the shaft with only the finest of diamond-tipped needles before allowing him to fall into the madness from what he saw. He couldn’t mistake it for anything other than The Grimrose wand. In his dreams, he’d hold it, make it his own. But Sarah found it first.
“One more time.” Sarah’s voice jolted him back to reality. “Give me the key, Carlos.” The energy in the room crackled as she pronounced each syllable. The ropes tightened just enough to let him know that at anytime they could sever a limb or three.
The key in his pocket took on a subconscious weight, a pressure to remind Carlos that he just needed to give it to Sarah to make it all stop. Still, he tried to struggle free, his body straining against the ropes, his spirit against her newfound magic. He just got the key. Just got power and he wasn’t ready to give it up yet. Their eyes met and Carlos hoped the anger on his face gave Sarah her answer. And, just to make it clear, he launched a spit wad at her face, only to watch his saliva salvo splat harmlessly on Sarah’s magical barrier, six inches from its target.
She didn’t say anything. She didn’t recoil from his tiny act of rebellion. She didn’t even make one of her famous mocking retorts. Any of these would’ve given Carlos the split second he needed to brace himself. Instead, she responded only with a flick of the wand. Simultaneously, the ropes lifted Carlos high into the vaulted ceiling. Then slammed him hard to the stone floor. Then back to the ceiling. Then the floor. Ceiling. Floor. Ceiling. Floor. Something broke, Carlos knew. Probably a rib. He would’ve heard it snap had it not been for the buzzing noise still emitting from all the magic Sarah was releasing.
The ropes disappeared and Carlos felt the pressure in the air build as Sarah stooped over him, picking the key from his pocket. “I am the new head of the House of Ash,” she said, taking a seat on the bed as Carlos struggled to his knees. She held both the wand and the key in her hands like trophies, admiring them as she spoke. “You know, they never saw me as a threat for the throne. Always just as the youngest of the grandchildren.” She went on about her newly acquired power and respect but Carlos wasn’t listening.
She’d taken from him. He could stand; he just needed the right moment. Physically, he was still stronger. Plus, he still possessed a lot of his own magic. Sarah, however, had been expelling hers like a leaky faucet, magical energy dripping from her even while she sat idle. He could take it all back, and more.
Sarah stood and moved to the door. “Now to give the family a glimpse of their new leader.”
Carlos lunged forward. Sarah froze, startled. Carlos surprised even himself at how quickly he moved. He pushed Sarah onto the bed and pulled the spell-cutter from his belt. Sarah raised Grimrose. This was his only chance. The air between them sizzled as Sarah started to summon a barrier between them. Carlos fueled the spell-cutter with as much magic as he could quickly find and forced the blade through the barrier and into Sarah’s chest, burying it to the hilt.
Leaving the knife, he gathered his original prize – the key to Ashcroft Manor. Just by touching it he saw and felt every square inch of the house: the location of every magic tool, the breeze as it circulated from room to room, which floorboards creaked. He was everywhere. Most important, he could hear doors open and close as his relatives poured into the house, searching for the power that was already his. Power they’d never take.
A whisper caught his ear and as he focused, it grew louder. Like a warm embrace, it welcomed him into the house, into the family. Repeating, over and over, “You’re a true Ashcroft now. You’re just like us.” Carlos smiled. “You’re a true Ashcroft now.” The head of the House of Ash, he thought, correcting the voice. “You’re just like us,” it whispered back.
That’s when he remembered the wand. It lay right where he left it, in Sarah’s now cold, stiff hand. He knew her body lay still yet he couldn’t help but imagine a stirring on the bed. Moving closer, he saw he was wrong – the body was moving. Half the knife blade now stood visible as if Sarah’s body collapsed in on itself. Even the blood flowed in unnatural streams along the bed, making its way toward the wand.
The wand! Grimrose fed to grow stronger and it would take all it wanted from Sarah until only a husk remained. Carlos looked at Sarah’s sunken face and her expression was clear – she wanted power, but she’d never murder her own brother for it. “You’re a true Ashcroft now,” the voice repeated, stronger than before. It was whimsical, laughing, familiar. It was Grandmother Ashcroft’s voice.
And now he saw what his grandmother had seen in him. Saw what he would do for power. He was just like them.
Before the blood touched the wand, Carlos picked it out of Sarah’s withered grip. The thorns dug into his skin with just the slightest touch. He felt a coldness from the wand as he raised it into the air, hatred as if the wand knew exactly what he was about to do. A roar filled the room as Carlos pushed his physically-exerted muscles to their limits to snap the piece of wood in half.
He heard his grandmother’s voice one last time as he tossed the two pieces to opposite ends of the room. Faintly, it whispered, “You’re just like us.” Us. The word echoed through Carlos’ mind. Us. He’d forgotten about his relatives, now swarming Ashcroft Manor like ants, all looking to claim power in any way and form they could find it.
“Perhaps this is the true Ashcroft legacy,” Carlos said to himself as he channeled all his remaining magical energies into the key. As it glowed brighter than anything he’d ever laid eyes on before, Carlos turned the key. Grandmother Ashcroft’s bedroom door slammed shut, as did the other fifty-two doors in Ashcroft Manor, with deadbolts and magical wards locking them tight. Then he took a seat on the bed next to Sarah. He was a true Ashcroft now, trapped in this living tomb like the rest of them.